自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, reduce fillers, and organize details with linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two or three specific supporting details using connectors (for example, “for example”, “and”, “also”, “so”). Avoid repetition and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. I used my bike mainly to get to school and visit my friends. I also rode it to do small shopping trips and bring groceries home for my family, which was quite convenient.

建議: Improve grammar and fluency, use clearer linking words and give a specific reason or example. Begin with a direct opinion, then support it with 2 specific reasons and a brief example. Avoid hesitations and duplicated words.

範例: Yes, bikes are fairly popular in my country. Many people use them to commute to work and to carry groceries or household items. For example, commuters often combine cycling with public transport because it is cheap and convenient.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Missing article 'a' before the singular noun 'child'. Use 'a child' to indicate nonspecific singular noun. Suggestion: include appropriate articles with singular countable nouns (a/an/the).

× I used it for uh, going to school and also I used it for go to shopping and bring groceries to my family and also I used it for visiting my friends.

✓ I used it for going to school, for going shopping and bringing groceries to my family, and for visiting my friends.

After 'used it for' the verb should be in the -ing (gerund) form. 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; use 'going shopping' or 'to go shopping' but not mixed. Also keep parallel structure: use the same grammatical form for each item (gerunds). Suggestion: use gerunds after 'used it for' and maintain parallelism.

× That's all I used it.

✓ That's all I used it for.

Preposition 'for' is required at the end of this phrasal structure 'use something for (doing) something'. Omitting 'for' makes the sentence incomplete. Suggestion: include the preposition 'for' to complete the meaning.

× Yes, I think bikes are quite for popular in my country because people use it to go to of their office and also they use it to to bring groceries and other important household materials.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because people use them to go to their offices and also to bring groceries and other important household items.

Multiple errors: 'quite for popular' has incorrect adverb placement and extra 'for' — correct is 'quite popular'. Pronoun 'it' is incorrect for plural 'bikes' so use 'them' (incorrect use of pronouns / subject-verb agreement). 'Go to of their office' is wrong preposition and noun form; should be 'go to their offices'. Repeated 'to to' is a typo. 'Household materials' is awkward; 'household items' is more natural. Suggestions: place adverb before adjective, match pronouns to plural noun, use correct prepositions and plural nouns when referring to individuals' offices.

× They also use it to commute.

✓ They also use them to commute.

Pronoun 'it' refers to 'bikes' (plural) so should be 'them'. Ensure pronoun number matches its antecedent. Suggestion: use 'them' when referring back to plural noun 'bikes'.