自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변은 직접적이지만 문법 오류와 자연스러운 표현 부족이 있습니다. 'when I was child'는 'when I was a child'로 고쳐야 하고, 간단한 이유나 추가 정보를 덧붙이면 더 좋습니다. 예를 들어 소유하지 않았던 이유(가족이 없었음, 도시 거주 등)나 대신 했던 활동을 한두 문장으로 부연하세요. 또한 문장이 하나뿐이므로 연결어를 사용해 자연스럽게 확장하세요.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school because my family lived nearby, so I never needed one.

建議: 답변에 문법 오류와 불완전한 문장이 있습니다. 'a bike is a very popular'는 'bikes are very popular'로 바꾸고, 'everybody can take bikes or' 부분은 불분명하므로 구체적인 이유(예: 대중교통 혼잡을 피할 수 있어서, 건강에 좋아서, 자전거 도로가 잘 발달해서 등)를 덧붙여 논리를 완성하세요. 연결어(so, because, therefore)를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 이어주세요.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Korea because many people use them to avoid traffic and to stay healthy, and there are extensive bike lanes in cities.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article (a/an/the). Add 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct. Suggestion: remember to use 'a' with singular, countable nouns ('a child').

× Yes, I think a bike is a very popular in Korea because everybody can take bikes or.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Korea because everybody can ride them.

There are multiple issues: 'a bike is a very popular' incorrectly uses the singular article 'a' with the adjective 'popular' that requires a noun (or use 'very popular' without 'a'), and 'take bikes or' is incomplete and uses the wrong verb. Also subject-verb agreement for general statements about bicycles should use plural 'bikes are'. Use 'ride' rather than 'take' for bicycles and replace the trailing 'or' with an object pronoun 'them' or complete the clause. Suggestion: when making general statements, use plural nouns (bikes are) and choose correct verbs for actions (ride bikes), and ensure clauses are complete.