自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the tense and give a direct topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail. Use past tense for childhood and one specific detail (e.g., reason or who shared one). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or borrowed my cousin's bike on weekends.

建議: Provide a clear opinion with a reason and specific supporting details. Avoid sentence fragments and unrelated personal statements. Use linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you often see people cycling to work or students riding to school, especially where traffic is heavy.

× I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The speaker mixes present simple 'don't have' with a past time marker 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past tense verbs consistently with past time expressions (e.g., 'when I was a child I didn't have a bike'). Grammar_problem_type_id:6

× I think bikes are popular in my country because. All that I want new bike.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them, and I would like to have a new bike.

The original contains an incomplete because-clause and an unclear second sentence. 'Because.' is a sentence fragment; it needs a reason after because. 'All that I want new bike.' is ungrammatical — missing articles and proper verb form. The correction completes the because-clause with a reason and rephrases the second idea: use 'would like to have a new bike' or 'I want a new bike.' Also include the article 'a' before 'new bike'. Grammar_problem_type_id:26