自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Улучшите грамматику и последовательность высказывания: используйте правильные времена (past simple), избегайте лишних пауз и повторов, стройте ответ из 2–4 предложений — сначала краткий ответ, затем дополнительная деталь. Например: сначала подтвердите, что у вас был велосипед, затем опишите его цвет и возраст, когда вы перестали на нём кататься. Используйте связки (for example, but, because) чтобы сделать речь связной.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright yellow and I loved riding it when I was about five. However, by the time I was ten it had become too small for me, so I stopped using it.

建議: Сосредоточьтесь на чётком выражении мысли и на правильной форме существительных и глаголов; избегайте повторов и заполнителей («uh», «but I think»). Дайте структурированный ответ: общее мнение, причина(ы) с конкретикой, краткое сравнение с текущим местом проживания. Используйте связки (because, however, in contrast) для плавного перехода между идеями.

範例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many places are crowded and cycling is an affordable way to travel short distances. However, since I now live in China, I have noticed that cycling seems even more widespread here due to extensive bike-sharing systems and better cycling infrastructure.

× Yes, when I was a child I have a bike it's was a yellow color and I really like this bike, but uh when I grow up it doesn't really fit my uh weight because it was a really small bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had a bike. It was yellow and I really liked this bike, but when I grew up it didn't really fit my weight because it was very small.

The speaker mixes present and past tense. Use the past tense for events that happened in childhood: 'have' -> 'had', 'it's was' -> 'it was', 'I really like' -> 'I really liked', 'when I grow up' -> 'when I grew up', 'doesn't really fit' -> 'didn't really fit'. Also simplify 'a yellow color' to 'yellow' and 'a really small bike' to 'very small' for naturalness. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in past tense when describing past experiences.

× I just tried it it when I was five years, but when I was 10 years it's was already not really.

✓ I first tried it when I was five years old, but by the time I was ten it no longer fit.

Errors: duplicate 'it it', incorrect tense/form 'it's was', and awkward phrasing 'already not really'. Use simple past 'tried' is fine, but add 'first' to clarify. Use 'when I was five years old' and 'by the time I was ten' plus 'no longer fit' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use standard time expressions like 'five years old' and 'by the time I was ten'.

× Well, I think in my country, bicycle are bicycles are really popular because in Russia you need to, uh, distances are really big and the bicycle is extremely convenient.

✓ Well, I think in my country bicycles are really popular because distances in Russia are very large and bicycles are extremely convenient.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches and redundancy: 'bicycle are bicycles are' is incorrect. Use plural 'bicycles are' to talk generally. 'Distances are really big' is better as 'distances... are very large.' Also avoid repeating the noun. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about a class of things and remove duplicated words.

× But I think, but now I live in China and I think here it's much more popular than in Russia.

✓ But now I live in China and I think bicycles are much more popular here than in Russia.

Avoid repeating conjunctions 'but' and the vague 'it’s'. Use plural 'bicycles are' to refer to the general popularity. Maintain present simple for current situation: 'I live' and 'are more popular'. Suggestion: streamline the sentence by removing repeated words and use clear subject 'bicycles' instead of 'it'.