自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 句子时态和语法需要更准确，句子更自然简洁，避免冗长重复。回答应以主题句开头，随后用一两句具体细节支持，并使用适当的连接词。可以把多个短句合并，修正动词时态（过去时）和单复数（grandparents, went riding/rode）的问题。

範例: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a gift from my grandparents because I did very well in my final exams when I was about ten, and I loved it. As a result, I rode it almost every day after school.

建議: 回答结构清晰，但部分语法和表达可更地道、更简练。使用正确时态和一致的主谓结构，并用连接词使对比更自然（e.g. however, although）。增加具体例子或数据会更有说服力。

範例: I think bicycles used to be more popular, but nowadays cars and motorcycles are much more common. However, cycling remains popular among people who care about the environment and among students in cities; for example, many university campuses encourage biking as a cheap, eco-friendly way to get around.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

原句使用现在时态“have”与过去时间状语“when I was a child”不一致，应使用过去时“had”。建议：在描述过去发生的事实时，用一般过去时。

× It's a gift from my grandparent and they gave it to me because I did well in the final exam when I was about 10 years old and I like it very much.

✓ It was a gift from my grandparents and they gave it to me because I did well in the final exam when I was about 10 years old, and I liked it very much.

（1）“grandparent”应为复数“grandparents”或明确单数并用单数代词；（2）整句描述过去的事件，应使用过去时态，所以“It's”改为“It was”，末尾“like”改为过去时“liked”。建议：注意人物复数与动词时态的一致性，描述过去事件全句使用过去时。

× I go on a riding every single day at that time.

✓ I went riding every single day at that time.

（1）短语“go on a riding”不规范，常用表达是“go riding”；（2）句中时间为过去，应使用过去时“went”。建议：使用固定搭配“go riding/go for a ride”，并保证时态一致。

× I would say it used to be, but nowadays there are more and more cars and motorcycles, so bikes are not as common as it was before, but it's still quite popular among those who are interested in protecting the environment.

✓ I would say they used to be, but nowadays there are more and more cars and motorcycles, so bikes are not as common as they were before. However, they're still quite popular among people who are interested in protecting the environment.

（1）主语“bikes”为复数，代词应使用复数“they”而不是“it”；（2）比较从句“It was before”中时态与主句保持过去应为“they were”；（3）句子较长可分为两句，使逻辑更清晰。建议：注意代词与先行词的数一致，比较结构中的时态与主句保持一致，并适当拆分句子以提高可读性。