自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答过于简短，未直接给出主题句以外的支持细节。建议在肯定或否定后用一两句补充具体信息（如什么时候有、是谁给的、经常骑去哪儿或有何回忆），并使用连词使表达更连贯。避免只用单词回答。

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven from my parents, and I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day. It was a small red bike with training wheels at first, and I remember learning to balance on weekends.

建議: 回答有主题句并尝试给出理由，但表达不够具体且有语法错误。建议修正语法（e.g. "have"），并提供更具体的支持细节，如流行的原因、在哪些人群中受欢迎或常见用途。同时使用连接词例如"because"或"for example"使论证更连贯。

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers ride bikes to commute, and in smaller towns people often use bicycles for shopping and visiting neighbors.

× My friends and my father ha all have it.

✓ My friends and my father all have one.

句子主语是复数（"My friends and my father"），谓语动词必须用复数形式。原句中出现了拼写错误和多余词语（"ha" 和 "it"），应改为复数动词形式并用更自然的代词或名词。建议用“have”作为谓语，并用“one”指代“a bike”更明确且自然。另外可以去掉多余的"ha"。改正后的句子："My friends and my father all have one."，这样主谓一致且表达清晰。