自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct grammar and use of tenses: use past simple for past facts (I had, I loved). Keep answers concise (max 3–4 short sentences) and start with a clear topic sentence. Add one or two specific supporting details and use a linking word if you add another sentence (for example, “because” or “so”).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it. Because my house was near a park, I often rode there with my friends on weekends. It became one of my favourite childhood activities.

建議: Use clearer sentence structure and correct subject-verb agreement (people like, not likes). Start with a direct answer (Yes/No) and then give 2 specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, “because” and “also”). Avoid vague phrases like “so popular” without specifics. Be concise (2–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short journeys and exercise. In rural areas they are practical for getting around, and in cities cycling is common because it is cheaper and faster than driving.

× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child and I really love riding.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I really loved riding.

The sentence describes a past situation, so past simple tense must be used. 'have' should be 'had' (past of have) and 'were' is incorrect for singular first person; use 'was'. Also 'really love' should be 'really loved' to maintain past tense consistency. Suggestion: use past simple for all verbs describing past events (had, was, loved).

× A bike is one of my favorite hobbies from my childhood.

✓ Riding a bike was one of my favorite hobbies from my childhood.

'A bike is one of my favorite hobbies' is awkward because a bike is an object, not a hobby. Use the gerund phrase 'Riding a bike' to name the activity. Also change 'is' to 'was' to match past time frame. Suggestion: use gerund for activities and past tense when referring to childhood hobbies.

× Of course, bikes are popular in my country because in some villages or also in the city center there are lots of people that likes very much riding bikes and I think it's so popular.

✓ Of course, bikes are popular in my country because in some villages and in city centers there are lots of people who like riding bikes, so I think they are very popular.

Several tense and agreement issues: 'that likes' is incorrect because 'people' (plural) requires 'like' (base form for plural third person). Replace 'that' with 'who' for people. 'Also in the city center' is better as 'in city centers' for generalization. 'Likes very much riding bikes' is awkward; use 'like riding bikes' or 'really like riding bikes'. Maintain present simple for general facts. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement (people like), use 'who' for people, and choose plural/general nouns for general statements.