自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise, and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unnecessary words like “already” in this context and fix verb forms (e.g., use “was” or “is broken”).

範例: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red bicycle my grandmother gave me for my seventh birthday, and I used it to ride to school and visit friends. However, it’s now broken and I haven’t used it in years.

建議: Make the answer more fluent and correct grammatical errors. Begin with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons connected with linking words. Use correct collocations (e.g., “easily accessible,” “people of all ages can ride”) and correct verb forms.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, they are easily accessible and affordable, so many people choose them for short trips. Secondly, people of all ages can ride bikes, which helps them stay fit and saves money on transport.

× Yes, I did have a bike since I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike since I was a child.

The original uses 'did have' which is unnecessary emphatic past form; when referring to a state that started in childhood and continued, 'have had' (present perfect) or simple past 'had' can be used depending on context. Because the question asked about possession in childhood (past), simple past 'I had a bike when I was a child' is most appropriate. Suggestion: say 'I had a bike when I was a child' or 'I had a bike since I was a child' only if you mean possession continued up to now, in which case use present perfect 'I have had a bike since I was a child.'

× Now it's already spoiled.

✓ Now it's already broken.

The verb 'spoil' typically means 'go bad' for food or 'become ruined' for objects but 'spoiled' is less natural for a bike; 'broken' is the correct past participle to describe a bike that does not work. Also 'it's already' is acceptable but 'it's now broken' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'broken' for malfunctioning objects.

× Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because it's easy accessible.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are popular in my country because they are easily accessible.

The original uses 'it's' (it is) which incorrectly refers to 'bikes' (plural). Also 'easy accessible' has word order and form errors: the adverb 'easily' should modify 'accessible'. Correct: 'they are easily accessible.' Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number and use adverbs to modify adjectives.

× Whenever you're young or old you can stay ride a bike.

✓ Whenever you're young or old you can still ride a bike.

The phrase 'stay ride' is incorrect. 'Stay' is unnecessary and 'ride' should be base verb after 'can'. Also 'still' (meaning 'even then') fits context. Suggestion: use modal + base verb ('can ride') and choose 'still' not 'stay' here.

× Plus it can makes us stay healthy.

✓ Plus it can make us stay healthy.

After modal 'can' the verb should be in base form 'make', not 'makes'. Also 'stay healthy' is acceptable; you could also say 'help us stay healthy.' Suggestion: use base verb after modals and consider 'help us stay healthy' for natural phrasing.