自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Correct the grammar and pronunciation, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, use past tense (had), correct word (bike), and briefly describe when or why you had it. Keep it natural and concise (1–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. For example, I got it for my seventh birthday and rode it to school most days, which helped me learn balance and independence.

建議: Be clear and avoid fillers. Use a full topic sentence that directly answers the question, and then provide a specific reason or comparison using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'however'). Correct any mispronounced or incorrect words (e.g., 'ebacks' -> 'e-bikes' or 'electric bikes').

範例: Yes, traditional bikes are still popular, but electric bikes have become more common recently because they are easier for commuting and hill riding.

× Yes, I have a back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Grammar problem type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue) and 27 (Subject-verb agreement). The student used present tense 'have' while referring to a past time 'when I was a child' so the verb should be past 'had'. Also 'back' is a typo or wrong word; the correct noun is 'bike'. Suggestion: Use past tense for actions or possessions in the past (I had) and check spelling/word choice (bike).

× Yes, but now uh, ebacks are more popular in my country.

✓ Yes, but now e-bikes are more popular in my country.

Grammar problem type IDs: 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 6 (Present tense issue) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions not applicable here). The student wrote 'ebacks' which is a misspelling and incorrect noun; the intended term is 'e-bikes'. The sentence otherwise is present tense and correctly describes a current trend, so no tense change is needed. Suggestion: Use correct spelling and standard term 'e-bikes' and maintain present tense for current general facts.