自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Grammar and clarity need correction. Use correct past tense forms and avoid contradictory phrases (e.g., “did not have” vs “I did have”). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I didn’t have my own bike when I was a child. Instead, I often borrowed a bicycle from a neighbor to ride with my friends, especially on weekends. Because of this, I learned to balance and ride confidently by the time I was ten.

建議: Correct subject-verb agreement and avoid absolute statements. Give specific reasons or examples and use linking words to organize points (e.g., ‘because’, ‘for example’, ‘as a result’). Keep answers concise and natural (2–4 sentences).

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers cycle to school or work to avoid traffic and save money. As a result, cycling is common in both cities and smaller towns.

× No, I did not had a bike when I was a child, but yes I do had a bicycle to ride along with my friends.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child, but I did have a bicycle to ride with my friends.

The auxiliary did requires the base form of the verb, so 'did not had' is incorrect; it should be 'did not have'. In the second clause 'do had' is incorrect for the same reason and also mixes present and past. Use 'I did have' to stay in past tense. Also 'ride along with' is wordy; 'ride with' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'did not + base verb' for past simple negatives and 'did + base verb' for past simple affirmatives.

× Yes, I thinks that bikes are the most popular means of travel in my country.

✓ Yes, I think that bikes are the most popular means of travel in my country.

With the subject I, the verb should be the base form 'think' not 'thinks'. 'Thinks' is used with third-person singular subjects (he/she/it). Suggestion: use the base verb after I in present simple: 'I think'.

× Every person in my country uses bike to go to their office or to school or to do their any work.

✓ People in my country use bikes to go to the office, to school, or to do any of their work.

There is a mismatch between singular and plural: 'Every person' (singular) followed by 'their' and 'uses bike' (singular noun without article). To fix, either keep singular: 'Every person in my country uses a bike to go to his or her office...' or make plural: 'People...use bikes...to do their work.' Using plural is more natural and avoids gendered pronouns. Also 'uses bike' needs an article or plural noun; 'use bikes' is correct. 'Their any work' is incorrect word order; 'any of their work' or simply 'their work' is better. Suggestion: make subject and verbs/nouns agree in number and place words in correct order.