自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: The student misheard and repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or brief statement), then one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, use correct tense (past simple) and simple linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repeating the question.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that I used to ride to my friend’s house and to school sometimes, because my neighborhood was safe and close by.

建議: The answer shows a clear opinion but has multiple grammar, vocabulary and pronunciation mistakes and some repetition. To improve, give a concise topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), use correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms, and avoid redundancy. Add one specific supporting detail (e.g. reason or example) and a linking word like 'because' or 'for example' to make it coherent. Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily transport. For example, in crowded cities where streets are narrow, cycling is faster and cheaper than driving, so lots of commuters choose bikes.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The question asks about a past situation, so use past simple 'did' rather than present 'do'. Also match the verb 'have' with past auxiliary: 'Did you have'. Suggestion: use past simple for past time expressions like 'when you were a child'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yeah, of course bites are so many popular in my country because there is a lot of people who are uses bikes and bikes is very essential for everyday.

✓ Yeah, of course bikes are very popular in my country because there are a lot of people who use bikes and bikes are very essential for everyday life.

Multiple errors: 'bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes' (word choice). 'are so many popular' is incorrect order and quantifier use; use 'are very popular' (adverb placement and adjective usage). 'there is a lot of people' should be 'there are a lot of people' (subject-verb agreement and plural noun; Grammar problem type ID 27 and 1). 'who are uses bikes' should be 'who use bikes' (incorrect verb form; third person plural uses base form after relative pronoun). 'bikes is' should be 'bikes are' (subject-verb agreement). Also add 'life' to complete 'everyday life'. Suggestions: check subject-verb agreement for plural subjects, use correct word order for modifiers (adverb before adjective), and use base verb after plural subjects or relative clauses. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Most, most kind of people are using bike because there is a lot of narrow roads. So yeah.

✓ Most kinds of people use bikes because there are many narrow roads. So yes.

'Most, most kind of people' is ungrammatical; use 'Most people' or 'Most kinds of people' depending on meaning (sentence structure error). 'are using bike' is awkward; use simple present 'use bikes' for habitual actions (present tense issue). 'there is a lot of narrow roads' should be 'there are many narrow roads' (subject-verb agreement and quantifier choice). 'So yeah' is informal; 'So yes' is a clearer confirmation. Suggestions: use simple present for routines, ensure correct plural forms and match verbs, and choose appropriate quantifiers ('many' with countable plural nouns). Grammar problem type ID:26