自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and natural with good detail and personal feeling. To improve, make the topic sentence more specific, avoid vague adjectives like "bright thing," and use linking words to structure your supporting details. Keep answers concise (≤5 sentences) and add a brief specific detail (e.g., color, model, where you rode it) to make it more vivid.

範例: Yes — I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven. I rode it every day after school around the cul-de-sac near my house, often racing my friends to the park. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt more confident learning to balance, and I remember being proud the day I removed them.

建議: Your answer is understandable but too short and unclear. Avoid fragments like "especially around. Child's age or period." Provide a clear topic sentence, then expand with specific reasons or examples and linking words. For example, say who uses bikes (commuters, children) and why (cheap, healthy, traffic). Keep it coherent and 2–4 sentences long.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and commuters. Many families use bicycles for short trips because they are inexpensive and easy to park, and schools often encourage cycling to promote exercise. As a result, you can see bike lanes and many bike-sharing schemes in larger cities.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially around. Child's age or period.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and fragmented. 'Especially around. Child's age or period.' is a fragment and unclear. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). To correct it, combine ideas into one coherent phrase: use 'especially among' to indicate the group that bikes are popular with, and replace the fragmented phrase with 'children and teenagers' to specify age groups. Suggestion: when describing popularity by group, use 'especially among + noun phrase' or 'particularly popular with + noun phrase.'