自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly with correct tense and clearer reasons. Use a topic sentence, then one or two clear supporting details with linking words. Correct grammar: use past tense for childhood, and avoid redundancy. For example, say you didn’t have a bike and explain why (safety concerns, age, or family rules). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents were worried about my safety because I was very young, and they thought cycling on busy roads would be dangerous. As a result, they didn’t allow me to ride until I was older.

建議: Start with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / also / moreover). Be concise and avoid repetition. Use appropriate vocabulary (commute, convenient, affordable, environment-friendly). Aim for 2–4 sentences and correct grammar and word order.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. They are convenient and affordable for short commutes, and many people prefer them because they save time and avoid traffic. Moreover, cycling is also seen as an environmentally friendly option for daily travel.

× No, I don't have bike in my childhood because my parents are very worried that if I drive a bike so it can be hard to me.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike in my childhood because my parents were very worried that if I rode a bike it would be hard for me.

Errors: present tense 'don't have' used for past time (uses Simple Past is required) — use 'didn't have' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). Missing article 'a' before 'bike' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22: Article errors). Incorrect conditional construction and modal tense: 'if I drive a bike so it can be hard to me' is ungrammatical; use past subjunctive/conditional 'if I rode a bike it would be hard for me' and correct preposition 'for' (Grammar Problem Type ID 7: Future tense issue partly but primarily Past conditional; also ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestions: use past simple to describe childhood, include articles before singular countable nouns, form conditional with past tense + would, and use 'for me' to show effect on the speaker.

× Definitely yes there are so many bikes because two bikes make it very easy to com commute in near places and many other because it save our time as well as so many other people who love to ride a bike they love. I also.

✓ Definitely yes, there are many bikes because they make it very easy to commute to nearby places, and they save time for many people who love to ride a bike. I do too.

Errors: Awkward repetition and incorrect structure 'two bikes make it' — unclear subject; use 'they' to refer to bikes (Grammar Problem Type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement and ID 26: Sentence structure errors). 'Com commute' is a typo; use 'commute' and correct preposition 'to' with 'nearby places' instead of 'in near places' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). 'It save' should be 'they save' to agree with plural subject (Grammar Problem Type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement). The final fragment 'I also.' is incomplete; convert to full sentence 'I do too.' (Grammar Problem Type ID 23: Sentence without a verb). Suggestions: Use clear subjects and pronouns, ensure verbs agree in number, fix typos, use 'commute to nearby places', and complete sentence fragments.