自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, relevant answer and expand with one or two brief supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and then add where or how often you used it, or why you didn’t have one. Keep it natural and within 1–3 sentences. Use linking words like “but” or “because” if you add details.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it to visit my grandparents and to go to the local park most weekends, but I didn’t ride far because the roads were busy.

建議: Answer directly (Yes/No/Partly) and give clear reasons or examples. Organize your response: a topic sentence, a linking word, and one or two specific supporting points (e.g., where bikes are common, who uses them, safety concerns). Avoid repetition and filler words; speak in complete simple sentences.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Bangladesh, especially in rural areas and among students because they are affordable and convenient. However, I think bike safety is a problem, as many roads lack bike lanes and accidents are common.

× Uh, my country is Bangladesh Bangladesh uh is a uh, Bangladesh bike, uh bike like is very accident.

✓ Uh, in my country Bangladesh, bikes often have many accidents.

The original sentence has disordered structure, repeated words, and incorrect phrasing. This matches 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Rearranged to a clear subject ('bikes'), verb ('have'), and object ('many accidents') and added 'in' to indicate location. Suggestion: state the location first ('in my country Bangladesh') and use a simple subject-verb-object order: 'Bikes often have many accidents.'

× No bike is the bike is very.

✓ No, bikes are not very safe.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical, a sentence-structure problem (ID 26). It appears the student intended to say bikes are unsafe. Corrected to a full sentence with clear subject ('bikes') and adjective ('not very safe'). Suggestion: use complete clauses and appropriate negation: 'No' as a discourse marker followed by a clear statement 'bikes are not very safe.'