自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and one or two supporting details. Avoid filler sounds (uh) and redundant phrasing. For example, start with “Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.” Then add a reason or frequency using linking words like “often” or “because.” Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day because it helped me get to the shopping mall and visit friends. I also enjoyed riding with my neighbors on weekends.

建議: Give a clear, direct opinion in the topic sentence and support it with specific details or examples. Use correct grammar for plural/singular nouns, verb tense, and linking words such as “however” or “although.” Be specific about who uses bikes (children, commuters) and why.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country nowadays. Although many people prefer cars and motorcycles, children still ride bikes to go to the shops or visit friends because it's cheap and convenient.

× Yes, I had the bicycle when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child.

The definite article 'the' implies a specific bicycle known to listener; here the student refers to having a bike in general during childhood. Use the indefinite article 'a' for non-specific singular nouns. Suggestion: use 'a bicycle' or 'a bike' when mentioning one of many or unspecific items. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× I riding bicycle, a bike almost every day.

✓ I rode a bicycle, a bike, almost every day.

The original uses an -ing form 'riding' without an auxiliary, creating an incorrect clause. The question asks about past habit, so use past simple 'rode'. Also add the article 'a' before 'bicycle' and commas for clarity. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits (I rode a bike almost every day). (Grammar problem type ID:8)

× Uh, because it's helped me to go to the shopping mall.

✓ Uh, because it helped me to go to the shopping mall.

The contraction 'it's' (it is/it has) is incorrect here. The intended meaning is past simple 'helped' with subject 'it' (the bike) so use 'it helped'. Do not combine 'it' with present tense auxiliary when referring to a past effect. Suggestion: use 'it helped me to get to the shopping mall' or 'it helped me go to the shopping mall'. (Grammar problem type ID:12)

× Currently bike is not really popular as much as used, but some child is still rode BIC bicycle to go to the shops and go to the friend.

✓ Currently bikes are not really as popular as they used to be, but some children still ride bicycles to go to the shops and visit friends.

Multiple problems: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to talk generally; use plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'as much as used' is incorrect; correct expression is 'as popular as they used to be'. 'Some child' should be plural 'some children'. Mix of past 'rode' and present meaning requires present simple 'ride' for habitual action. 'BIC' is irrelevant brand and should be 'bicycles'. 'go to the friend' should be 'visit friends' or 'go to a friend's house'. Suggestions: use plural nouns for general statements, correct comparative phrase 'as popular as they used to be', and use present simple for current habitual actions. (Grammar problem type ID:6)