自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap çok kısa ve konuyla doğrudan ilgili ayrıntı içermiyor. Doğru yapı: önce doğrudan cevap verin, sonra nedenini veya detay verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (for example, because, so) cevabınızı genişletin ve örnek veya anekdot ekleyin. Ayrıca "I'm sorry" ifadesi bu bağlamda gerekli değil; bunun yerine açık bir ifade kullanın. Örnek adımlar: 1) Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (Yes/No + kısa açıklama). 2) Daha sonra sebepler veya bir anı ekleyin. 3) Bir sonuç veya karşılaştırma ile bitirin.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a busy city where it was unsafe to ride. For example, streets were crowded and there were few bike lanes, so my parents preferred I walked or took public transport. As a result, I only learned to ride a bike in my teens.

建議: Cevap anlaşılmaz ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor; ayrıca destekleyici ayrıntı yok. Önce açık bir konu cümlesi verin (Yes/No + kısa açıklama), sonra popülerlik nedenlerini bağlaçlarla açıklayın (for example, because, such as). Spesifik örnekler veya karşılaştırmalar ekleyin (şehir/taşıma/rekreasyon). Kısaltmalar veya anlamsız kelimeler kullanmayın. Ayrıca en fazla 5 cümleyle cevaplayın.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, cities have been adding dedicated bike lanes and there are many bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling convenient. However, popularity varies between big cities and rural areas, where cars are more common.

× No, I'm sorry.

✓ No, I didn't.

The student's reply is intended to answer a past simple yes/no question: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' A correct short negative answer uses the auxiliary did + not (contracted to didn't) with the base verb: 'No, I didn't.' Saying 'No, I'm sorry.' is a sentence expressing apology, not a direct answer. Suggestion: Use short answers that mirror the question's tense and auxiliary; for example, 'No, I didn't.'

× Yes, I can't because. Garrett.

✓ Yes, I think so.

The examiner asked a present simple opinion question: 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' A coherent affirmative response is 'Yes, I think so.' The original 'Yes, I can't because. Garrett.' is ungrammatical and contains fragments: 'I can't because.' lacks an object or reason and 'Garrett.' is an unrelated word/name. Suggestion: Give a full sentence expressing opinion in present simple, e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient.'