自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Bạn đã chỉ lặp lại câu hỏi của giám khảo thay vì trả lời. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi nếu cần thì thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết. Sử dụng từ vựng cụ thể (ví dụ: model of bike, how often you rode, who bought it) và liên từ đơn giản để nối ý.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I rode it almost every day around the neighborhood. Because the roads were quiet, I quickly learned to ride without training wheels.

建議: Bạn tiếp tục lặp lại câu hỏi và không cung cấp thông tin. Hãy nêu ý kiến trực tiếp, rồi đưa ra lí do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "however" để làm câu mạch lạc và giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in cities and among students, because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. However, in larger cities many people prefer motorbikes due to traffic and longer distances.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/response error: the reply needs a subject and main verb to form a complete answer. Suggestion: Provide a full sentence answer matching the past tense of the question, e.g., 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.' or 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.' Use 'had' for past tense and include the subject 'I.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The original student response repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. This is a problem with providing an appropriate present-tense reply. Suggestion: Respond using present simple to match the question, e.g., 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.' or 'No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.' Include a subject and verb to form a proper sentence.