自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short statement), then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Keep your answer natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and include specific details such as age, type of bike, how often you rode it, or who taught you. For example, begin with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then follow with reasons or a brief anecdote.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was seven, and I rode it to visit my friends every afternoon. Because my neighborhood was quiet, my parents felt comfortable letting me cycle alone, which helped me become confident on the road.

建議: Good: you answered directly and gave reasons. To improve further, make the answer more natural and specific, vary vocabulary, and add a linking word for cohesion. Avoid minor grammar issues (e.g., use “use bikes” or “use bicycles” not “are using bikes”) and reduce repetition. Provide a specific example or statistic if possible to strengthen your response.

範例: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because they’re cheap and convenient for short trips. For instance, many students and office workers cycle to work or school every day, and in some cities nearly half of commuters use bikes during peak hours.

× Yes they are. Most of the people in my country are using bikes for daily use and daily commuting. It's very popular indeed.

✓ Yes, they are. Most people in my country use bikes for daily travel and commuting. They are very popular indeed.

The original contains present continuous 'are using' which is unnatural for habitual actions; habitual actions require simple present (use). 'Most of the people' is wordier; 'most people' is more natural. 'Daily use and daily commuting' is repetitive; 'daily travel and commuting' or just 'commuting' is clearer. Also 'It's very popular indeed' mismatches plural subject 'bikes' so use plural 'They are very popular indeed.' Suggestions: use simple present for regular habits, match subject and verb number, simplify redundant phrases.