自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, use correct tense, avoid self-correction mid-sentence, and add one or two brief supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then give a specific detail and a short reason or memory. Keep it to 1–3 sentences and use linking words if needed.

範例: Yes, I did. It was a small pink bicycle with dangling tassels on the handlebars, and I used it to ride around the neighborhood every summer because I loved feeling free.

建議: Give a clear, grammatical statement and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to connect ideas. Avoid fillers like “umm” and incomplete phrases. Keep answers concise (2–3 sentences) and use plural agreement correctly.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular. For example, many people use them for short trips to work or school because they are cheap and convenient, and cities have more bike lanes now to encourage cycling.

× Yes, I have and it's pink with a ribbon on the handle part.

✓ Yes, I had one and it was pink with a ribbon on the handle.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present; change to 'had'. Also 'a bike' was implied, so use 'one' or repeat 'bike'. 'Handle part' is unnatural — 'handle' or 'handlebar' is better. Suggestion: use past simple for past events and natural noun phrases.

× Oh, it's not a ribbon, but it is dangling.

✓ Oh, it is not a ribbon; it was dangling.

Pronoun 'it' refers to the ribbon or decoration; maintain past tense to match the context. The punctuation and conjunction can be improved. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use clear punctuation; use 'was dangling' for past continuous state.

× Yes it is. Umm, I always see someone using a bicycle as their part of.

✓ Yes, they are. I often see people using bicycles as part of their transportation.

Question asked about general popularity in the present, so plural subject 'bikes' requires plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement) and 'someone' should be 'people' for general statements. 'Always' can be replaced by 'often' for natural frequency. 'As part of' needs an object: 'their transportation' or 'their means of transport'. Suggestion: use plural verbs and nouns for general facts and complete the prepositional phrase.

× Forward all transportation and also some people use this as.

✓ They are used for short-distance transportation, and some people use them as their main means of transport.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. 'Forward all transportation' is incorrect phrasing. Clarify the idea: bikes are used for short trips or commuting. Complete the second clause with an object ('their main means of transport'). Suggestion: express ideas with a clear subject and complete verbs/objects, and use natural collocations like 'short-distance transportation' or 'commuting'.