自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Clarifiez et simplifiez votre réponse: commencez par une phrase claire au passé, évitez les répétitions et corrigez la concordance des temps. Ajoutez un détail spécifique (par exemple l’âge ou le type de vélo) et utilisez un lien logique si vous expliquez pourquoi vous ne l’utilisez plus.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a red mountain bike that I got when I was eight. I used it every day to ride to my friend’s house, but I haven't used it for many years because I now live far from my old neighbourhood.

建議: Organisez votre réponse et choisissez le temps correct. Commencez par une opinion claire (Yes/No/It depends), puis donnez une raison spécifique et un exemple. Évitez hésitations et mots répétitifs; utilisez des connecteurs pour la cohérence (for example, however, now).

範例: I think bikes have become more popular in recent years. For example, cities have added bike lanes and more people use bikes for short commutes. However, in rural areas they are still less common because distances are longer and public transport is limited.

× Yes, when I when I was a child, I have I had a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike.

The student mixed present and past tense by saying 'I have' and 'I had' together. The question asks about the past, so use simple past consistently. Suggestion: remove 'I have' and keep 'I had' to match the past time reference.

× I had a bike but since now I didn't use it for for long years.

✓ I had a bike, but I haven't used it for many years.

The phrase 'since now' is incorrect and 'didn't use it for long years' misuses past simple with a period continuing to the present. Use present perfect (haven't used) with 'for many years' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues up to now. Also replace 'long years' with the more natural 'many years'.

× Umm, I can't say very because a few years ago I would say that the the bags were not very popular.

✓ Umm, I can't say for sure, but a few years ago I would say that bikes were not very popular.

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure: 'can't say very' is incomplete and 'the the bags' seems to be repetition and wrong noun. The context asks about bikes; change to 'for sure' for clarity and 'bikes' instead of 'bags'. Use past tense 'were' to refer to a few years ago.

× We had we usually had to use the the course, but now as clearly.

✓ We usually had to use the course, but now that has changed.

This sentence has repetition ('We had we usually had'), wrong phrase 'use the course' which is unclear, and 'but now as clearly' is ungrammatical. I corrected repetition, maintained past habitual 'usually had to', and replaced the unclear ending with 'but now that has changed' to indicate a change from past to present. If 'the course' refers to a specific route or service, replace with the appropriate noun (for example 'public transport' or 'car').