自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh từ thừa như “like” và lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ “the my house”). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (loại xe, tần suất sử dụng, cảm xúc). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, sử dụng từ nối nếu cần.

範例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it every afternoon around our neighbourhood. I loved feeling free and I often rode with my friends until it got dark.

建議: Cần tránh lặp từ và tiếng thổ lộ như “umm” hay “if you ask me I will”. Cần trình bày ý kiến trực tiếp, giải thích rõ lý do với cấu trúc câu chính xác (ví dụ: “because they are convenient and cheaper than cars”). Sử dụng từ nối như “because” để liên kết lý do, và sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., “much cheaper”). Giữ câu súc tích, 2–3 câu là đủ.

範例: Not really. Motorbikes are the most popular vehicle in my country because they are very convenient for narrow streets and much cheaper to buy and maintain than cars. Many people also use them to avoid traffic during rush hour.

× When I was a kid my parents bought me a bicycle to like go around the my house.

✓ When I was a kid my parents bought me a bicycle to go around my house.

The phrase 'to like go' incorrectly inserts 'like' before the base verb and uses an unnecessary article 'the' before 'my house'. Use the infinitive 'to go' after 'bicycle to' to express purpose, and remove 'the' because 'my house' already specifies the noun. Suggestion: Remove filler words like 'like' in formal responses and use correct infinitive form: 'bought me a bicycle to go around my house.'

× I will say that the motorbike is the most popular vehicle in my country as umm, is it convenient and yeah it much more cheaper than cars.

✓ I will say that the motorbike is the most popular vehicle in my country because it is convenient and much cheaper than cars.

Errors: missing subject 'it' before 'is convenient', incorrect comparative phrase 'much more cheaper' (double comparative). Use 'because' for reason instead of 'as' informally, include subject for 'is convenient', and use 'much cheaper' (cheaper already comparative). Suggestion: Use 'because it is convenient and much cheaper than cars.' Avoid double comparatives and include subjects for clauses.