自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, use correct tense and grammar, and give a concise supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then briefly explain why you didn’t have one. Avoid repetition and irrelevant details.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family was quite poor, so I had to help my parents by working on the streets instead of owning toys or a bicycle. Because of that, I only learned to ride later in my teens.

建議: Give a clear main idea, then support it with two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing and unnecessary words. Use comparative phrases and accurate vocabulary (e.g., cheaper, convenient, faster, affordable).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, they are cheaper to buy and run than cars, which makes them affordable for many people. Secondly, they are convenient for navigating crowded streets and often faster for short trips, so many commuters prefer them.

× No, I don't have any bike.

✓ No, I didn't have any bike.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense 'don't have' contradicts the time reference. Use 'didn't have' for simple past negative. Also consider adding an article: 'a bike' is fine.

× When I was tired, I used to work on the streets with my parents.

✓ When I was a child, I used to work on the streets with my parents.

The sentence has a logical/time reference issue rather than strict grammar: 'When I was tired' conflicts with asking about childhood; the student likely meant 'when I was a child.' 'Used to' is correctly used for past habitual actions. Change the time phrase to match the context.

× I don't have any bike or any bicycle in my childhood.

✓ I didn't have any bike or any bicycle in my childhood.

The time frame 'in my childhood' requires past tense. Use 'didn't have' instead of 'don't have.' Also, 'bike' and 'bicycle' are redundant; use one: 'I didn't have a bicycle in my childhood.'

× Yes, nowadays bikes are more popular in our country because bikes sells us to move from one place to another place.

✓ Yes, nowadays bikes are more popular in our country because bikes help us to move from one place to another.

Subject-verb agreement: 'bikes sells' is incorrect; plural subject 'bikes' needs the base verb 'sell' or better verb 'help.' The phrase 'sells us to move' is ungrammatical; use 'help us to move' or 'allow us to move.' Also remove redundant 'place.'

× It is an easier means of transportation.

✓ It is an easy means of transportation.

Use 'easy' not 'easier' because there is no explicit comparison. 'A means' is singular and requires 'a.' 'Easy' describes the mode; 'an easy means of transportation' is idiomatic.

× Many peoples are using bikes is a mode of transportation because it is less cheaper than other expensive cars and it helps us to be get our destination earlier.

✓ Many people use bikes as a mode of transportation because they are cheaper than expensive cars and they help us reach our destination earlier.

'Peoples' is incorrect; use 'people' for plural. Structure: 'are using bikes is a mode' is ungrammatical; use 'use bikes as a mode.' 'It is less cheaper' is wrong: 'cheaper' already expresses comparison, do not add 'less.' Match pronouns: 'they' for plural 'bikes.' 'Helps us to be get our destination earlier' is incorrect; use 'help us reach our destination earlier.' Use present simple for general statements.

× Thank you.

✓ Thank you.

No grammar error. This closing is appropriate.