自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, dạng động từ, giới từ) và câu hơi thiếu chi tiết. Hãy sửa các lỗi như dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động đã xảy ra, dùng động từ đúng (ride → rode) và giới từ phù hợp (ride with someone). Đồng thời mở rộng thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: khi nào bạn đi, nơi bạn đi, kỷ niệm nhỏ) và sử dụng liên từ để làm mạch văn rõ ràng hơn. Giữ độ dài tối đa 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my friends around the neighbourhood. Sometimes my family and I went cycling in the park on weekends, which I really enjoyed because it felt freeing and healthy.

建議: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (by it → bikes, famous transport → awkward phrasing, is very friendly for environment → incorrect word order/grammar). Cần dùng từ vựng tự nhiên hơn (popular, common, eco-friendly) và giải thích cụ thể vì sao (ví dụ: giao thông, giá rẻ, tiện lợi, thân thiện môi trường). Dùng liên từ để nối lý do (because, so) và nêu một ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn. Giữ câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tối đa 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I do. Bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. Moreover, they are eco-friendly, so many people prefer them in crowded cities to avoid traffic and reduce pollution.

× Yes I did. I often ride by with my friend and my family.

✓ Yes, I did. I often rode my bike with my friends and my family.

The student answered a question about the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the verb describing habitual past action should be in the past tense ('rode') rather than the present tense ('ride'). Also 'ride by' is incorrect in this context; use 'rode my bike' to clearly indicate the action. 'Friend' should be plural ('friends') if more than one, or keep singular but match context; here 'my friend and my family' is awkward, so 'my friends and my family' is more natural. Suggestion: use past simple for past habitual actions and include the object 'my bike'.

× Yes I do. I think by it a very famous transport because is very friendly for environment.

✓ Yes, I do. I think bikes are a very popular means of transport because they are very environmentally friendly.

Multiple errors: 'by it' is incorrect pronoun/word choice; use 'bikes' or 'they'. 'a very famous transport' is ungrammatical—'means of transport' or 'mode of transport' is correct. Missing verb 'are' before 'very friendly' and missing article 'the' before 'environment' or better 'environmentally friendly'. The sentence should use plural agreement ('bikes' and 'they are'). Suggestion: use 'bikes are a very popular means of transport because they are environmentally friendly.'