自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer directly and use correct tense and clearer phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and incorrect grammar (e.g., use past tense 'didn't have', 'because', and 'couldn't afford').

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. However, I often borrowed bicycles from neighbors, which let me ride with friends on weekends.

建議: Give a clear, grammatical statement and support it with specific reasons or examples using linking words. Use correct noun forms and adjectives (e.g., 'bikes are popular', 'young people', 'memorable experience'). Keep answers concise (no more than 4–5 sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among young people, because they are cheap and convenient. For example, students often cycle to school and groups of friends enjoy weekend rides, which creates memorable experiences.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child due to the fact that my financial situation is not good for at the time, so I don't uh, get the bike for buying.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my financial situation wasn't good at that time, so I didn't buy a bike.

Multiple tense problems: the speaker mixed present tense ('don't have', 'is not good', 'don't get') with past context 'when I was a child'. Use simple past for completed past situations: 'didn't have', 'wasn't good', 'didn't buy'. Also simplified wording: 'because' instead of 'due to the fact that' and 'at that time' for clarity. Suggestion: Keep verbs in the past when describing past circumstances and use concise connectors (because, so) for clarity.

× Uh, definitely bike is a very popular in my country, especially for the youngest persons who is love to travel, uh, with their friends by bike.

✓ Uh, definitely the bike is very popular in my country, especially among young people who love to travel with their friends by bike.

Article and noun choice: include the definite article 'the' before 'bike' when referring to bicycles in general. 'Youngest persons' is incorrect: use 'young people' or 'youngest people' depending on context; here 'young people' is natural. Subject-verb agreement and pronoun: 'who is love' mixes singular verb with plural subject; use 'who love'. Preposition: use 'among' or 'for' rather than 'for the youngest persons'. Suggestion: Use 'the' for general categories when appropriate, say 'young people' for youths, and ensure the verb after 'who' agrees with the plural antecedent.

× It's a interval and the memorable experience that people's ever tried in their life.

✓ It's an interval and a memorable experience that people have ever tried in their lives.

Article and noun form: 'interval' requires 'an' before it. However 'interval' is awkward here; likely 'an exciting and memorable experience' fits better. 'People's ever tried' is ungrammatical: use 'people have ever tried' and plural 'lives' for 'people'. Also the phrase 'have ever tried in their lives' is more natural in present perfect. Suggestion: Prefer 'an exciting and memorable experience that people have had' or 'one of the most memorable experiences in their lives' for natural phrasing.