自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response is unclear and appears to be a mishearing of the examiner's question. For Part 1 you should directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and, if needed, one or two supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Also, pay attention to pronunciation so the examiner can understand you. A good structure: short direct answer (Yes/No + brief detail), then a supporting detail with a linking word (because/so/for example).

範例: Yes, I did. I had a simple red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used to ride it to visit friends in the neighbourhood. Because my parents lived in a quiet area, it was safe for me to practice riding every afternoon.

建議: Your answer answers the question but is slightly contradictory and disorganized. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your opinion, then support it with specific details and linking words. Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Be precise about where bikes are popular and why (e.g., traffic, infrastructure, culture). Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I don't think bicycles are very popular across Jordan overall. However, they are more common in some towns and in Amman among young people who use them for short trips, because traffic congestion and limited parking make bikes convenient. For example, many students and couriers in Amman prefer cycling for short journeys.

× Did you have a bite from your side?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used the word 'bite' incorrectly instead of 'bike', which changes the meaning completely. This is a vocabulary/word choice error and results in an ungrammatical or nonsensical sentence in context. Correct the single word to 'bike' to match the examiner's question. Also ensure the sentence structure matches the question's past tense 'Did you have... when you were a child?'. Suggestion: listen for similar-sounding words and confirm pronunciation; practice minimal pairs (bite/bike) and repeat full-question forms to avoid short-word errors.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country? No, they aren't popular in Jordan. In like towns and villages. It's popular like in Amman, Jordan, the capital of Jordan.

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country? No, they aren't popular in Jordan in most towns and villages. They are more popular in Amman, the capital of Jordan.

There are several issues: a sentence fragment ('In like towns and villages.') and informal filler 'like' used incorrectly. 'It's popular like in Amman' is awkward and uses singular 'it' when referring to 'bikes' (plural). Also repetition 'Amman, Jordan, the capital of Jordan' is wordy. Fix by combining fragments, removing filler 'like', using plural agreement ('They are'), and smoothing the location phrase. Suggestion: avoid fillers like 'like' in formal responses, ensure each sentence has a subject and verb (no fragments), keep subject-verb number agreement, and use concise appositives (Amman, the capital of Jordan).