自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be sure to use the correct past tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details (when, who it belonged to, or how you used it). Use linking words if you add extra information.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day.

建議: Make sure subject–verb agreement is correct and avoid vague phrases. Begin with a direct answer, then give a specific reason and an example or brief comparison. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, I see dozens of cyclists on my way to work every morning, especially near the parks and markets.

× Yes, I have a bike when when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used the present tense verb 'have' to refer to a past situation. This is a present tense issue (ID 6). Use the past simple 'had' to match the time expression 'when I was a child'. Also remove the duplicated word 'when'. Suggestion: use past simple for events that occurred in the past (e.g., 'I had a bike when I was a child').

× Yes, I think it is popular because I can see a many people riding their bicycle every day.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular because I can see many people riding their bicycles every day.

There are several problems: 'it is popular' incorrectly uses a singular pronoun for the plural subject 'bikes' (subject-verb agreement, ID 27) and the verb number (use 'they are'). 'a many people' is incorrect quantifier usage (should be 'many people'), and 'their bicycle' should match plural owners with plural noun 'bicycles'. The corrected sentence uses plural pronoun and verb ('they are'), removes the extra article before 'many', and pluralizes 'bicycles'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number with their subjects and match plural owners with plural nouns.