自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and more coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details connected with linking words (for example, use 'so' or 'because'). Also correct word choice (use 'shy' → likely 'young' or remove) and plural/singular agreement (a bike / bikes).

範例: Yes. I had a pink bicycle when I was a child. I rode it every day to school and to visit my friends, so it was an important part of my daily routine.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and avoid hesitation sounds. Use linking words (for example, 'for example' or 'also') and provide a specific reason or example. Correct subject–verb agreement and plural forms, and remove filler words like 'uh'.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many families own at least one bicycle, and people often ride them in parks and on short trips because they are cheap and convenient.

× Yes, I have a bike when I'm shy because I have a pink bicycle bicycle and I ride.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because it was a pink bicycle and I used it a lot.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so present tense 'have' and 'I'm' are incorrect; use past tense 'had' and 'was'. Also 'bicycle bicycle' is a repetition and 'I ride' is vague; 'I used it a lot' fits past context and clarifies meaning. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× I ride bicycle every every day when I go to school, when I go to play with my friend, I choose ride bike.

✓ I rode the bicycle every day when I went to school and when I went to play with my friends; I chose to ride my bike.

Sentence mixes present and past tenses and has repetitions ('every every'). For past context use past tense verbs 'rode' and 'went'. Add definite article 'the bicycle' and plural 'friends'. Use 'chose to ride my bike' for correct verb structure and clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Of course bike is very popular in my country.

✓ Of course bikes are very popular in my country.

The singular noun 'bike' with singular verb 'is' sounds unnatural when speaking generally; use plural 'bikes' with plural verb 'are' for general statements about many items. (Grammar problem type ID: 27)

× Every every home have a bike and in my home I have a bike, so.

✓ Every home has a bike, and in my home I have one too.

Use singular 'every home' with singular verb 'has' ('every' requires singular). Remove repetition and use 'one' to avoid repetition of 'a bike'. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)

× And for example, in Thailand, uh, people like ride bicycle in public place.

✓ For example, in Thailand, people like riding bicycles in public places.

After 'like' use the -ing form 'riding'. Use plural 'bicycles' and plural 'public places' for general statements. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)