自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答自然且信息充足，但可以更直接开门见山（主题句），并用一两句具体细节或短例子丰富内容，同时注意不超过五句。你可以在开头直接说“是的，我有一辆自行车”，然后用连接词（例如“because”或“so”）引出具体细节，如你骑行的路线、一次难忘的经历或学会骑车的年龄。

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used to ride it with my friends around the neighborhood almost every afternoon because we liked exploring new streets. Once we raced to the small park and I learned how to do a sharp turn, which made me feel brave and independent.

建議: 回答清晰且相关，但可用更有条理的连接词（例如“Firstly, … Secondly, …”或“Moreover”）把观点分层，同时给出更具体的数据或对比来增强说服力（比如常见人群、具体场景或方便性的原因）。保持句子数量不超过五句。

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, they are cheap and perfect for short trips, so many students use them. Secondly, the rise of shared bike services in cities means office workers often ride to subway stations. As a result, you can see bicycles everywhere during rush hour.

× For example, I often see students and office workers ride bikes to the subway station.

✓ For example, I often see students and office workers riding bikes to the subway station.

句中動詞 see 後面接的賓語從句若要描述正在發生的動作，應使用動名詞（-ing 形式）來表示持續或正在進行的動作。原句用不定式 ride 與 see 搭配不符合英語慣用法。建議記住常見的動詞搭配，例如 see/feel/hear + 人 + doing（表示看到某人在做某事）。