自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, tense consistency and add a brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then give one or two short supporting details (reason or brief context). Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences. Use linking words if you add details (for example, “because” or “so”).

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a city where it was difficult to cycle because the roads were busy, so my parents preferred I walk or take the bus. As a result, I only learned to ride a bike when I was a teenager.

建議: Make the sentence more natural and fluent, avoid hesitations (“uh”), and be specific about who uses bikes and why. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words like “because”, “for example” or “especially”. Keep answers concise (2–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially among students and commuters. This is because they are cheap and convenient, and many cities now have bike lanes and shared-bike schemes, for example.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't have' with past time phrase 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'didn't have' to match the past context; also add the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past states: 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Yes, in my country the bike is very, uh, popular in all over age.

✓ Yes, in my country bikes are very popular among all age groups.

Several issues: 'the bike' incorrectly uses definite article; plural 'bikes' is appropriate when speaking generally. 'Is' should be plural 'are' to agree with 'bikes' (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'in all over age' is ungrammatical; use 'among all age groups' or 'across all ages'. Also remove filler 'uh' in written answer. Suggestion: say 'Bikes are very popular across all ages in my country.'