自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your response repeats the examiner's question and adds an unrelated word (“care”), so it does not answer the question. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short statement), then add one or two specific supporting details (age, who gave it, how often you used it). Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 5 sentences), and avoid repeating the question. Use linking words like “and” or “so” if you add details.

範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven from my parents, and I rode it to school and around the neighborhood every day during summer. It helped me become more independent and confident on the road.

建議: Again, you repeated the examiner’s question instead of giving your opinion. To improve, state your opinion clearly (e.g., yes/no/partly), then support it with specific reasons or examples (urban vs rural use, cycling infrastructure, cultural habits). Use linking words like “because” or “however” to connect ideas and keep it within 1–4 sentences for clarity.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular, especially in cities because many people use them to avoid traffic and for short commutes. However, in rural areas cars are still more common since distances are longer and cycling lanes are limited.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child care?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The word 'child care' is incorrect in this context. The question asks about being a child (noun), not child care (which refers to childcare services). This is a vocabulary/word choice error that causes sentence structure to be wrong. Suggestion: remove 'care' and use 'child' to correctly ask about childhood: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'

× Do you think bikes are popular in our country here?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The original sentence uses 'our country here' which is awkward in this exam context where the examiner likely asked about the student's country. 'Our' implies the speaker and listener share the country; 'here' is redundant. Use 'your country' to match the examiner's question or simply 'in your country'. Suggestion: say 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' to be clear and natural.