自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two concise supporting details. Avoid repeating the examiner’s wording and use correct grammar (e.g., “Did you have any?” is not appropriate here). Aim for 2–3 sentences, use linking words if you add details, and give a short reason or memory to make the answer more meaningful.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. However, I remember borrowing my neighbour’s bike sometimes to ride around the neighbourhood.

建議: Structure your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid filler sounds (“uh”) and vague phrases (“most probably”). Be precise about reasons and include an example or comparison. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “popular,” “common,” “high-capacity motorcycles”) and keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in my country, especially in Jammu and Kashmir. In particular, many people prefer high-capacity bikes—around 200cc or more—because they are powerful and suit long mountain roads. For example, during festivals you can see groups of riders touring the valleys on such bikes.

× Yes uh, the bikes are popular in my country and most probably it is most famous in my hometown Jammu and Kashmir.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, and they are probably most popular in my hometown, Jammu and Kashmir.

Pronoun 'it' was incorrectly used to refer to 'bikes' (plural). Use plural pronoun 'they' to match the plural noun. Also change 'most famous' to 'most popular' to keep meaning consistent and adjust word order for clarity. Suggestion: match pronouns to their antecedents in number and keep parallel structure in compound sentences.

× Most of the people like to purchase super bikes which are 200CC plus bikes.

✓ Most people like to purchase superbikes that have engines of 200 cc or more.

Awkward repetition 'super bikes which are 200CC plus bikes' and inconsistent form '200CC' and capitalization. Use a single compound noun 'superbikes' or 'super bikes' consistently, and use a relative clause 'that have engines of 200 cc or more' for clarity. Also use 'Most people' instead of 'Most of the people' for general statements. Suggestion: avoid repetition and keep measurements in a consistent, standard format.