自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır ama dilbilgisi ve doğal ifade açısından hatalar var. Özellikle zaman uyumu ve yardımcı fiiller yanlış kullanılmış (ör. 'have' → 'had', 'were' → 'was'). Cümle yapısını düzeltin ve gerekirse kısa bir ekleme yaparak deneyiminizi biraz daha açıklayın. Önerilen odak noktaları: doğru past tense kullanımı, tek cümlede ana fikir + bir destekleyici detay (ör. nerede, kimle, ne sıklıkla) ve 1–2 bağlaçla akış sağlama.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; it was quite big and I used to ride it to my friend's house every weekend.

建議: Cevap fikir veriyor fakat gereksiz ifadeler ve tekrarlamalar var ('It's a perfect question' gibi). Karşılaştırma yaparken daha net yapılar ve bağlaçlar kullanın. Dilbilgisi olarak zaman ve kelime düzenine dikkat edin (ör. 'people who are riding' → 'people who ride'). Cevabı 2-3 cümlede tutun: doğrudan görüş + spesifik örnek + kısa karşılaştırma. Ayrıca 'work or their home' yerine 'work or home' daha doğal.

範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. However, some people do ride bicycles to work or home, especially in smaller towns. In contrast, cycling seems much more common in many European cities.

× Yes, I have a bike when I were a child and it was big.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and it was big.

The sentence uses present tense 'have' and incorrect past form 'were'. The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so verbs should be past tense. Use 'had' for possession in the past and 'was' for singular first-person past of 'to be'. Suggestion: change 'have' to 'had' and 'were' to 'was' to match past time reference.

× It's a perfect question and I think bikes are not popular in my country like in Europe, but sometimes I'm seeing people who are riding a bike to their work or their home, but in Europe I think it's more popular.

✓ That is a good question, and I think bikes are not as popular in my country as they are in Europe, but sometimes I see people riding a bike to work or home; in Europe I think they are more popular.

Multiple tense and structure issues: 'It's a perfect question' is awkward for a response — use 'That is a good question'. The clause comparing popularity requires 'not as ... as' structure. 'I'm seeing' is present continuous implying temporary ongoing action; simple present 'I see' is more appropriate for habitual actions. 'Who are riding a bike to their work or their home' is wordy; use 'riding a bike to work or home'. Also include pronoun agreement and verb 'are' for 'they' when referring to bikes in the comparison. Suggestions: use 'not as ... as', replace present continuous with simple present for habitual actions, and simplify phrases for clarity.