自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas. Also correct small grammar mistakes (e.g., articles, word order) and finish the sentence cleanly.

範例: Yes. My dad bought me a red bike with white trim when I was about ten. I loved cycling in the neighborhood park every weekend, and I often rode with friends until sunset.

建議: Answer directly, use precise vocabulary and avoid filler phrases. Give one or two specific examples or reasons, joined with linking words (e.g., "for example", "because", "also"). Correct collocations (ride a bicycle, go cycling) and finish your idea fully.

範例: Yes. Cycling is very popular in Taiwan because many people enjoy riding bicycles for recreation and commuting. For example, there are dedicated cycling routes along the coast and in the mountains, and many local cycling clubs organize weekend rides.

× Yes, I had a bike that my dad bought for me when I was about 10 years old and this a red one with some white color and I I really loved cycling in the park with.

✓ Yes, I had a bike that my dad bought for me when I was about 10 years old. It was a red one with some white details, and I really loved cycling in the park.

Multiple issues: run-on sentence and missing verb forms. The clause 'this a red one' lacks the verb 'was' (be issue but categorized here as past tense issue because the narrative is past). Also 'some white color' is awkward; 'some white details' is clearer. Repeating 'I I' is a typographical error. Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, use past tense 'was' for description, and choose natural collocations like 'white details' or 'white stripes'. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yeah, in my perspective, Taiwan has a huge amount of people who really enjoy riding bicycle or go cycling in the mountains or in a road. And it's really popular, so many, many people try to.

✓ From my perspective, in Taiwan many people really enjoy riding bicycles or going cycling in the mountains or on roads. It's very popular, so many people do it.

Several preposition and verb form errors: use 'from my perspective' or 'in my opinion' instead of 'in my perspective'. Use 'many people' rather than 'a huge amount of people' (countable). Use plural 'bicycles'. Use parallel gerunds: 'riding bicycles or going cycling' (better: 'riding bicycles or cycling'). Prepositions: 'on roads' not 'in a road'. The final clause 'many, many people try to' is incomplete; use 'do it' to complete the idea. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('on roads'), match countable/plural nouns, and maintain parallel structure for verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 11