自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more natural and slightly more detailed. Start with a clear topic sentence, add one specific supporting detail (why you had it or how you used it), and use a linking word if you add another point. Keep it under five sentences and avoid odd phrasing like "at class 7."

範例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was in seventh grade. I used it every day to ride to school because our house was too far to walk. As a result, I became quite confident cycling on busy roads.

建議: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, "for example" or "in addition"). Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like "in almost every of my relatives." Use more varied vocabulary (e.g., "common," "widely used"). Keep it concise (max five sentences).

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, most of my relatives, including my father, uncle and brother, own bicycles because they are an affordable way to travel. In addition, many children learn to ride at a young age, so cycling is a common skill.

× Yes, I had a bicycle when I was at class 7.

✓ Yes, I had a bicycle when I was in class 7.

Use of preposition: 'in' is the correct preposition with 'class' or 'grade' to indicate being a student in that year. 'At' is incorrect here. Suggestion: say 'in class 7' or 'in seventh grade'. Grammar problem type's ID: 5

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country and in my village, in almost every of my relatives such as my father, my uncle, my brother.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country and in my village; almost every one of my relatives, such as my father, my uncle, and my brother, has one.

Multiple issues: 'in almost every of my relatives' is ungrammatical. Use 'almost every one of my relatives' or 'almost all of my relatives'. Also list items need commas and 'has one' shows possession singular. Subject-verb agreement also matters: 'relatives... has' requires 'every one' as singular so 'has'. Suggestion: use 'almost all of my relatives' + 'have bikes' or 'almost every one of my relatives has one'. Grammar problem type's ID: 11

× Everyone has bikes and everyone rides them.

✓ Everyone has a bike and everyone rides it.

'Everyone' is singular, so verbs and pronouns referring back should be singular. Use 'has a bike' (or 'has bikes' if emphasizing multiple but better 'a bike') and singular pronoun 'it'. Suggestion: use 'Everyone has a bike and everyone rides it.' Grammar problem type's ID: 27

× And even my little brother knows how to ride bike fluently.

✓ And even my little brother knows how to ride a bike fluently.

Missing article 'a' before 'bike'. Also 'ride bike' is non-idiomatic; use 'ride a bike'. The verb form 'ride' after 'knows how to' is correct. Suggestion: include the article and natural collocation: 'ride a bike'. Grammar problem type's ID: 8}]} PMID: 4.0)