自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Focus on grammatical accuracy, clarity, and relevance. The response contains incorrect tense and wrong nouns (bag vs. bike) and is unclear. Give a direct topic sentence answering the question in past tense, then one or two supporting details (who gave it, how often you used it, or a memory). Keep to 2–3 short sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so” if adding reasons.

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for my eighth birthday, and I used to ride it to school every day because it was faster than walking.

建議: Answer directly and avoid repeating previous mistakes by using correct vocabulary. State your opinion clearly (yes/no) and give specific supporting details such as how many people ride bikes, common places for cycling, or reasons for popularity (cost, convenience, fitness). Use linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see bike lanes and many students and office workers cycle to save time and money.

× Yes, I have a bag when I were, uh, tailed.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student used present tense 'have' and incorrect past form 'were' and wrong noun 'tailed'. The question asks about the past, so use past tense 'had'. Subject 'I' with past of 'to be' is 'was' not 'were'. Also 'tailed' is not appropriate; 'when I was a child' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past experiences: 'I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Oh yes, uh. I think bags are popular in our country.

✓ Oh yes. I think bikes are popular in our country.

The student answered about 'bikes' but used 'bags', likely a word choice error. The noun 'bikes' is plural and agrees with 'are popular'. The correction replaces the incorrect noun while keeping correct plural form. Suggestion: pay attention to vocabulary matching the question and keep subject and verb number consistent (plural noun with 'are').