自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense consistently, avoid fillers (uh), and add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Also vary vocabulary (e.g., "learned to ride," "encouraged me"). Keep to no more than 4–5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I did. My father gave me a small bicycle when I was seven, and he taught me to ride it. Although I fell a few times at first, his encouragement helped me gain confidence, and I soon rode around the neighborhood every day.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and linking words, and provide one specific reason and an example. Avoid awkward phrasing (e.g., "not preferring to bike by their own") and maintain natural vocabulary (e.g., "prefer cars or taxis"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Not really. In my country many people prefer cars or taxis because public transport and ride-hailing are convenient and affordable. For example, most commuters choose a taxi or drive to work rather than cycle due to traffic and long distances.

× I used to own a bike that is given by my father and he actually teaches me how to ride a bike while I fell down a couple times, but it really let me uh, have a chance to create a habit on uh, biking.

✓ I used to own a bike that was given to me by my father, and he actually taught me how to ride it while I fell down a couple of times, but it really gave me a chance to develop a habit of biking.

The original sentence uses present tense forms 'is given' and 'teaches' when describing past events; these should be past participle or past simple forms. 'Is given' should be 'was given' (passive past) and needs the preposition 'to' for the recipient: 'given to me'. 'Teaches' should be 'taught' to match the past time frame. 'Let me have a chance' is awkward and uses 'let' incorrectly for this meaning; 'gave me a chance' or 'helped me develop' is more natural. Use 'a couple of times' (include 'of') and 'habit of biking' instead of 'create a habit on biking'. Suggestions: keep past tense consistently for past events, use correct passive 'was given to me', use past simple 'taught', replace 'let me have a chance to create' with 'gave me a chance to develop', and use 'habit of biking'.

× I actually don't think so, because in my country the technology is well developed and people are not preferring to bike by their own.

✓ I actually don't think so, because in my country technology is well developed and people do not prefer to ride bikes on their own.

'The technology' is unnatural; use 'technology' without the definite article when speaking generally. 'Are not preferring' is incorrect present continuous for a general preference; use simple present 'do not prefer'. 'To bike by their own' is ungrammatical: use the verb 'ride' with 'bikes' and the phrase 'on their own' rather than 'by their own'. Suggestions: use simple present for general truths, omit unnecessary articles, use 'prefer to ride bikes on their own'.

× They are more willing to call a cab or getting their own car.

✓ They are more willing to call a cab or to get their own car.

After 'willing' or 'be willing to', the base verb with 'to' is required; 'getting' (a gerund) is incorrect here. Use the infinitive 'to get' to parallel 'to call' (or 'call'). Also 'call a cab or get their own car' maintains parallel structure. Suggestions: use parallel infinitive forms after 'willing', e.g., 'willing to call a cab or to get their own car', or simply 'willing to call a cab or get their own car'.