Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
No, because every family have their own car, it's run faster and uh big can take more family, uh, people it's.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分數: 20.0建議: 你的回答没有正面回应考官的问题,而且只是重复了考官的话。请直接给出肯定或否定的答案,然后用一两句具体细节扩展,比如什么时候有,骑车的频率或与谁一起骑。注意句子简洁,最多不超过五句,并使用连词(例如 because, so, and, when)使表达连贯。
範例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven and I used to ride it to the park every afternoon. I often rode with my older brother, which helped me become more confident and independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分數: 45.0建議: 你的回答给出了观点和原因,但语法和表达较混乱,且有重复填充词(uh)。请改进句子结构:先给出简洁的主题句,然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持你的观点,使用连词(for example, because, so)连接想法,避免重复。注意主谓一致和单复数形式。
範例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most families own a car. Cars are faster and more convenient for carrying several people, so many people prefer driving rather than cycling.
× No, because every family have their own car, it's run faster and uh big can take more family, uh, people it's.
✓ No, because every family has its own car. It runs faster and a big one can carry more people.
错误类型(主谓一致 / 第27项):句中主语与动词形式不一致。具体问题:1) every family 作单数,谓语应为 has 而不是 have;2) it 指代 car,单数第三人称动词应为 runs;3) 原句中“big can take more family” 结构不完整且用词不当,应补充名词(a big one)并用 carry people 表达“载更多人”。建议:注意 every + 单数名词需用单数动词;代词指代时要清晰并配合正确动词形式;使用 a big one 指代前文的 car,使用 carry people 更自然。