自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and a wrong tense. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question (use past tense), then give one or two brief supporting details. Use linking words such as "Yes, I did" or "No, I didn’t" and follow with "because", "so", or "for example". Keep it to 1–3 short sentences and avoid repeating the examiner's question.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven because my parents bought it for my birthday, and I rode it to the park every weekend.

建議: Your response does not answer the question and contains serious grammatical and content errors (including an inappropriate phrase). First, state your opinion directly (e.g., "Yes, they are popular" or "No, not very popular"). Then give one or two specific reasons and a brief example, linked with words like "because", "for example", or "however". Keep sentences simple and relevant to popularity, such as commuting, leisure or safety.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute short distances and for exercise. For example, you can see many cyclists in parks and near schools on weekends.

× Do you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The question refers to a past time (when you were a child) so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Do you have' is present tense and disagrees with the time reference. Use the past auxiliary 'did' with the base verb 'have' to form the past question: 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' Suggestion: Use past tense auxiliaries (did) for questions about past situations.

× When I was about 7 years old.

✓ I had a bike when I was about 7 years old.

This fragment lacks a main verb and does not answer the question. The examiner asked whether the student had a bike; the response should be a complete sentence with a subject and verb. Adding 'I had a bike' completes the sentence and matches the past-time reference. Suggestion: Provide a full sentence that includes a subject and verb to answer the question directly.

× And I used to ride with them when crowds kill my friends out every weekend.

✓ I used to ride it with my friends every weekend.

Multiple errors: 'ride with them' is unclear—use 'ride it' or 'ride bikes' and specify 'my friends' as companions. 'when crowds kill my friends out every weekend' is incorrect and meaningless here. Likely intended: 'with my friends' and frequency 'every weekend.' Also tense 'kill' is present; past or habitual action should use past habitual 'used to' and simple present for routines. The corrected sentence uses 'used to ride it with my friends every weekend' to express a habitual past action. Suggestion: Replace unclear or incorrect phrases with concise prepositional phrases ('with my friends') and ensure verbs match habitual past meaning ('used to').