自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: You repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct response with a clear topic sentence, then one or two brief supporting details (maximum 5 sentences). Use linking words if adding details. Be specific about age, type of bike, or memories to make your answer richer.

範例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels from ages five to eight, and I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood. Because my parents encouraged outdoor play, I got quite confident riding without help by age seven.

建議: Again, you repeated the question instead of answering. Provide a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, however, because) to connect ideas and keep the response natural and concise.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in cities. For instance, many commuters use city bikes or e-bikes because they are cheaper and faster than cars during rush hour, and local governments have built more bike lanes recently to encourage cycling.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/use issue: a question should be answered with a statement. Use past simple 'had' to match 'when you were a child.' A clear improvement: provide a direct response (Yes/No) followed by a past-tense statement and optional brief detail, e.g. 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. This is a sentence structure/use issue: rather than echoing the question, respond with an opinion. Use present simple 'think' and 'are' to match the question's tense. A clear suggestion: answer directly and optionally justify, e.g. 'Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because many people use them for short trips.'