自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Respond in the past tense, answer directly, and add a brief reason or detail. Keep it natural and no more than 3–4 sentences. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) if you add details.

範例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it wasn’t safe for me to ride on busy streets, so I usually walked to school. Occasionally I borrowed a neighbor’s bike on weekends.

建議: Be specific and avoid unclear terms. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give reasons or examples with linking words (e.g., for example, because, therefore). Use relevant vocabulary like commuting, cycling infrastructure, or recreational biking.

範例: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially for short commutes and exercise. For example, many people cycle to work in the morning because traffic is heavy, and cities have been adding bike lanes recently to encourage cycling.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The examiner asked about a past situation ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use past tense. 'I don't' is present tense and does not match the question. Change to 'I didn't' to correctly respond in the past tense. Suggestion: Use past tense auxiliaries (did/didn't) when answering questions in the simple past.

× Yes, I think UMM bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think many bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence uses 'UMM' which appears to be a typo or incorrect word choice. If the intention was to say 'many' (a quantifier) then replace 'UMM' with 'many'. This fixes the incorrect word usage. If the student meant a brand name, use the correct brand spelling and possibly add an article if needed (for example, 'Yes, I think the UMM bikes are popular in my country'). Suggestion: Choose correct vocabulary; use 'many' for quantity or correct brand names with appropriate articles.