自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more consistent in tense and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural, concise (no more than 4–5 sentences) and avoid redundant phrases. For example, correct verb forms (had / used), avoid mixed modal mistakes, and replace vague phrases like "I appreciate that's quite a lot" with a clear comment about feelings or benefits.

範例: Yes — I had a small bicycle when I was a child. My parents bought it for me, and I used it every day to ride to school, which made my commute much easier. I enjoyed the independence it gave me and often rode with my friends after classes.

建議: Improve grammar and register — avoid casual contractions like "'cause" in the test. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, "because", "for instance"). Use accurate verb forms and collocations (e.g., "play an important role in daily life", "a means of transport").

範例: Yes, definitely. Bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient. For instance, many people use bikes to commute short distances in cities, and older people often cycle for exercise, which shows they are useful for all ages.

× My parents bought this for me and I use it every day to ride to school, which make would make my commute much easier.

✓ My parents bought it for me and I used it every day to ride to school, which made my commute much easier.

The sentence mixes past and present tense. The context is about childhood (past), so verbs should be past tense: 'use' -> 'used' and 'make would make' is incorrect and should be 'made'. Also 'this' referring to the bicycle is better as 'it'. Suggestion: keep all verbs describing past events in past tense to maintain consistency.

× I appreciate that's quite a lot.

✓ I appreciate that; it was quite a lot.

The original is awkward and unclear. 'Appreciate' in present tense clashes with a past context; better to say 'I appreciated that' or 'I appreciate it' depending on intent. Here the student likely means they valued the help in the past: use 'it was quite a lot' or 'I appreciated that; it helped a lot.' Also a semicolon or conjunction clarifies the two ideas. Suggestion: choose tense consistent with surrounding sentences and combine clauses clearly.

× Yes, definitely yes. Many people in my country use this means of transport.

✓ Yes, definitely. Many people in my country use this means of transport.

Redundant 'yes' is stylistic rather than grammatical, but the main issue is repetition. Replace 'Yes, definitely yes.' with 'Yes, definitely.' for natural spoken English. The tense 'use' is correct here because it's a general present situation.

× It's play an important role on daily life 'cause it's convenient and easy to use no matter your age or your gender.

✓ It plays an important role in daily life because it's convenient and easy to use no matter your age or gender.

Pronoun 'It' is fine, but verb form should be third person singular 'plays' (subject-verb agreement). Preposition should be 'in daily life', not 'on daily life'. 'Because' should be used instead of informal ''cause' in formal correction. Also drop 'your' before 'gender' to be more natural. Suggestion: use 'plays', 'in', and 'because'; ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions.