自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be careful with tense consistency and pronunciation of contractions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking word. Use past tense for wishes about the past (e.g., 'I wish I had one'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid unnecessary words.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I really wanted one because my friends often rode to the park and I felt left out.

建議: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement, past participle) and use linking phrases to connect ideas. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use 'because' or 'for example' correctly and check countable nouns and determiners (e.g., 'kids and adults', 'the bike' -> 'bikes').

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For example, I often see kids and adults cycling to school or the market since bikes are cheap and convenient.

× I wish I have one.

✓ I wish I had one.

The verb tense after 'I wish' should be past simple when expressing a present unreal desire. 'I wish I have' is incorrect because it mixes present tense with a hypothetical meaning. Use 'I wish I had one' to indicate you do not currently have one and you are imagining it.

× Yes, I do believe bike are popular in our country because I seen a lot of kid and adults riding on the bike.

✓ Yes, I do believe bikes are popular in our country because I have seen a lot of kids and adults riding bikes.

Several errors: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' to match 'are popular' (plural noun with plural verb). 'Seen' requires the auxiliary 'have' to form present perfect: 'have seen'. 'Kid' should be plural 'kids' to agree with 'a lot of'. 'Riding on the bike' is unnatural; use 'riding bikes' or 'riding their bikes'. Overall subject-verb and noun-number agreement and correct perfect tense are needed.

× It's easy access to go anywhere.

✓ It's easy to get anywhere.

The phrase 'easy access to go anywhere' is ungrammatical. 'Access' is a noun and would require 'to' with a noun object (e.g., 'easy access to transportation'). For expressing the ability to reach places, use the adjective phrase 'easy to get anywhere' or 'it's easy to go anywhere'. This corrects word choice and prepositional structure.