自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời hiện tại không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Hãy: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp bằng câu chủ đề (Yes/No + brief). 2) Thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: ai tặng, khi nào, thích điều gì) dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "when" để kết nối. 3) Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu, dùng từ vựng cơ bản chính xác (bike, ride, learn, parents, neighborhood).

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I learned to ride it in our neighborhood park. I enjoyed riding with my friends every weekend because it was a fun way to explore nearby streets.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng, ngôn ngữ rời rạc và không trả lời trực tiếp. Hãy: 1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu ý kiến (Yes/No/It depends). 2) Giải thích lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: giao thông, giá, thể thao, môi trường). 3) Dùng liên từ như "because", "however", "for example" để liên kết ý. 4) Sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp (popular, common, transport, cycling, expensive/inexpensive).

範例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them for short trips and exercise because they are cheap and convenient in crowded cities. However, in bigger cities some people prefer motorcycles or cars for longer distances.

× Did you have a pride when you were trying?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. 'Pride' is the wrong word; the examiner asked about 'a bike'. 'When you were trying' is ungrammatical and does not match the past time frame; the correct phrase is 'when you were a child.' Suggestion: use the exact noun from the question (bike) and a clear past time expression ('when you were a child') to form a proper past simple question response.

× You do you change price are popular in your country.

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

The sentence is ungrammatical and appears to combine unrelated words; word order and choice are incorrect. To answer the examiner's question, use the correct question form 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' or as a statement 'Bikes are popular in my country.' Suggestion: decide whether you are asking a question or making a statement, use correct subject-verb order, and choose appropriate vocabulary ('bikes', 'popular').