自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Content is relevant and mostly clear, but there are grammar mistakes (tense and phrasing), a small redundancy and the answer ends abruptly. To improve: 1) Use correct past tense consistently (e.g., "got the hang of it", "gained confidence"). 2) Keep the response concise (max 4–5 sentences) and finish your final sentence. 3) Add one specific supporting detail (where you rode it or who taught you) linked with a connector like "because" or "so" to make it more coherent. Example improvements: correct verb forms, smoother linking words, and a brief concluding remark.

範例: I did. When I was about six, my mother bought me a new bicycle, and I practiced riding it every day. At first I was a little wobbly, but after I got the hang of it I gained a lot of confidence, so I started riding to the nearby park by myself.

建議: The answer tries to give a reason but contains contradictions and confusion (saying bikes are less popular but then saying people find it more convenient to travel by bicycle). To improve: 1) Make your main point clear in one topic sentence (e.g., "No, they are not very popular"). 2) Use clear reasons with correct vocabulary (e.g., "motorbikes are more convenient for commuting") and avoid repeating words. 3) Add a specific example or comparison and a linking word such as "because" or "for example". 4) Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my country. People prefer motorbikes because they are faster and better for longer distances, especially for commuting to work or school. For example, many commuters use motorbikes to cover several kilometers quickly during rush hour.

× At first I was a little bit wobbly, but right after I get a hang of it, I gain confidence a lot.

✓ At first I was a little bit wobbly, but right after I got the hang of it, I gained a lot of confidence.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence describes past events, so verbs must be in the past tense. 'get a hang of it' is incorrect phrase and tense; correct idiom is 'get the hang of it.' Use past simple 'got' and 'gained' to match 'was' and the time frame. Suggestion: keep all verbs in past simple when recounting past experiences and use standard idioms ('get the hang of it').

× I.

✓ (Remove fragment)

This is a sentence fragment containing only a pronoun and a period. It should be removed or completed. Suggestion: delete the stray 'I.' or complete the thought, for example 'I remember feeling proud.'

× Bicycles in my country are not as popular as motorbikes because people find it more convenient to travel by bicycle to get to their work to the to schools.

✓ Bicycles in my country are not as popular as motorbikes because people find it more convenient to travel to work or to school by motorbike.

Preposition and word order errors and redundancy: 'travel by bicycle to get to their work to the to schools' is ungrammatical and repetitive. The intended meaning contrasts convenience of motorbikes vs bicycles. Reorder phrases for clarity and use correct prepositions: 'travel to work' and 'travel to school.' Also adjust vehicle: if motorbikes are more convenient, say 'by motorbike.' Suggestion: state the mode of transport after 'by' and place destination phrases ('to work', 'to school') before or after consistently.