自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar, accuracy and fluency. Use correct past-tense forms and simpler, natural phrasing. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds ("umm", "uh") and incorrect verbs ("were" → "was", "had know" → "learned").

範例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me so I could learn to ride, and I learned to ride it when I was about five years old.

建議: Make the answer more natural and cohesive. Start with a clear opinion, then add specific reasons and an example using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Remove repetition and fix word order. Use complete sentences and a small amount of detail to support your view.

範例: Not really. Cars and motorcycles are much more popular because they are faster and more practical. For example, in my city few people cycle on the streets, especially for commuting.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The subject 'I' requires the verb form 'was' in the past tense. 'Were' is used with plural subjects or in subjunctive contexts. Use 'was' for correct subject-verb agreement in past simple statements.

× Umm, my parents bought it for me, uh, to in order to practice my driving skill.

✓ Umm, my parents bought it for me in order to practice my driving skills.

The phrase 'to in order to' is redundant; choose either 'to' or 'in order to'. Also 'driving skill' should be plural 'driving skills' to sound natural when referring to ability. Use 'in order to' + base verb or simply 'to' + base verb, and keep noun number consistent.

× I had know how to drive a bike when I was five years old.

✓ I knew how to ride a bike when I was five years old.

'Had know' is incorrect: the past simple 'knew' should be used. Also English commonly uses 'ride a bike' rather than 'drive a bike'. Use the simple past 'knew' to match 'when I was five years old.'

× Not, not really. I think cars and motorcycles are more popular in my country.

✓ Not really. I think cars and motorcycles are more popular in my country.

The repeated 'Not, not really.' is informal and redundant. Use a single 'Not really' for clarity. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

× People in my city don't really ride a bike, ride bikes when on the street.

✓ People in my city don't really ride bikes on the street.

The phrase is redundant and awkward. Use plural 'ride bikes' to match general subject 'People' and place modifier 'on the street' should follow the verb phrase. Remove the repeated phrase for clarity and correct pronoun/verb agreement.