自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장 구조와 표현이 대체로 이해되지만 몇 가지 오류와 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 예를 들어 'learned how to ride a bike on when I was a high school student' 문장은 불필요한 전치사와 어순 오류를 포함합니다. 더 자연스럽게 말하려면 주제문을 명확히 하고, 간단한 추가 설명(언제, 왜 늦었는지)을 연결어(after/so/because 등)로 매끄럽게 이어주세요. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 유지하고 불필요한 단어(예: actually, quite late)를 줄이면 더 효과적입니다.

範例: I didn't have a bike as a child. I only learned to ride one when I was in high school because my parents didn't think I was ready before then.

建議: 내용이 명확하고 관련 어휘를 사용했지만 말하기에 몇몇 비공식적 충돌어(Uh)와 어색한 주어-동사 표현이 남아 있습니다. 더 구체적인 근거(예: 통계, 이용 목적, 특정 서비스 이름)와 연결어(For example, because, moreover)를 사용해 답변을 풍부하게 하세요. 최대 3문장 내로 유지하고 반복을 피하세요.

範例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Korea. For example, many people cycle for exercise or commuting, and Seoul's public bike-sharing system, called 'Seoul Bike,' is widely used across the city.

× Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I learned how to ride a bike on when I was a high school student.

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I learned how to ride a bike when I was a high school student.

The error is an extra preposition 'on' before 'when I was a high school student', which is incorrect in English. Remove 'on' so the clause correctly uses the past time expression 'when I was a high school student'. Suggestion: use 'when' alone to indicate the time you learned something in the past, and ensure the sentence remains in past tense to match 'didn't have' and 'learned'.

× Yes, of course bikes are popular in Korea. Uh, many people enjoy it and there is also a popular public bike service in Seoul.

✓ Yes, of course bikes are popular in Korea. Uh, many people enjoy them and there is also a popular public bike service in Seoul.

The pronoun 'it' is used to refer to the plural noun 'bikes', which is incorrect. Use the plural pronoun 'them' to match the plural antecedent. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with the nouns they replace (bikes -> them).