自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, use past tense for past events, expand slightly with a brief reason or detail (1–3 short supporting sentences). Keep it natural and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'so' or 'because' if giving reasons.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn't afford one, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. I remember sometimes borrowing a neighbour's bike on weekends.

建議: Avoid repetition and be more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details or examples using linking words such as 'because' or 'for example'.

範例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in cities you can see dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes that many commuters use.

× No, I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense, so the response must also be in the past tense. Using 'don't have' is present tense and conflicts with the time reference. Change the auxiliary from 'do' to 'did' and use the base verb 'have' to form the past-tense negative: 'didn't have'. Suggestion: Pay attention to the time frame in the question (past), and match the tense in your answer by using past-tense auxiliaries like 'did'.

× Yes, I think yes, I think the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The repetition 'I think yes, I think' is redundant and awkward. Also the phrase 'the bikes are popular' is grammatically acceptable but usually we omit the definite article when speaking about things in general: 'bikes are popular.' The main issue is unnecessary repetition and slight article misuse. Suggestion: Keep answers concise and match general statements with present simple: 'I think bikes are popular in my country.'