自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve grammar and keep the answer natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Provide one brief supporting detail using a linking word. For example, say you didn’t have a bike because of parental rules and mention one consequence or feeling.

範例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't allow me to ride without a license. As a result, I usually walked to school or used public transport, so I didn't learn to ride until I was older.

建議: Make the response more natural and specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example using a linking word. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., "many people", "affordable", "convenient") and avoid awkward phrases like "number of masses" or "average provided."

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily travel. For example, they are affordable and convenient for short trips, and you can often see commuters and students riding bikes to work or school.

× No, I didn't really had a bike when I was a child as my parents didn't didn't really allowed me to drive without a license.

✓ No, I didn't really have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't really allow me to ride without a license.

Error: Using past tense form 'had' and 'allowed' after the auxiliary 'did' is incorrect. When using the auxiliary 'did' for past simple negatives or questions, the main verb should be in base form. Also corrected 'didn't didn't' duplicate and changed 'drive' to 'ride' which is more appropriate for bikes, and 'as' to 'because' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'didn't' + base verb (have/allow) and proofread for duplicate words. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, I do think that bikes are really popular in my country because a number of masses do use bikes in their daily lives as the average provided by bikes are quite good and affordable.

✓ Yes, I do think that bikes are really popular in my country because many people use bikes in their daily lives, as the services provided by bike systems are quite good and affordable.

Errors: 'a number of masses' is awkward and ungrammatical; use 'many people' or 'a large number of people'. 'The average provided by bikes' is unclear; likely meant 'services provided by bike systems' or 'availability'. Also subject-verb agreement with 'services ... are'. Suggestion: Use natural quantifiers like 'many people' and clear nouns like 'services' or 'availability' to convey the meaning. Grammar problem type ID:14