自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (tenses/prepositions/plurals), avoid redundancy, and use linking words to add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it to a maximum of 3–4 short sentences.

範例: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child and I rode it to and from school. In the afternoons and at the weekend, I practised tricks in the park with a friend, which was really fun and helped me become more confident on two wheels.

建議: Be specific and correct vocabulary: begin with a clear opinion, then give two concise, well-linked reasons with accurate nouns and prepositions. Fix errors (e.g., 'type 1' unclear, 'bike share stations', plural forms) and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example'.

範例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in Taiwan, especially in Taipei. This is because many people own bicycles and the government has built extensive bike paths and bike-share stations, which makes cycling a convenient way to travel.

× Yes, I owned a bike when I was a kid and I often rode at home from school and at a weekend.

✓ Yes, I owned a bike when I was a kid and I often rode it home from school and on weekends.

The verb tense 'owned' is correct for past. Errors: missing object after 'rode' (needs 'it'), incorrect preposition 'at home from school' should be 'it home from school', and 'at a weekend' is unnatural; use 'on weekends' for habitual past. Suggestion: include the object for transitive verb 'ride' and use correct prepositions for time expressions.

× I love practicing trick in the park with my friend, it was a great time.

✓ I loved practicing tricks in the park with my friend; it was a great time.

Tense inconsistency: 'I love' (present) conflicts with past context 'it was a great time.' Change to past 'loved.' Also 'practicing trick' requires plural 'tricks' or 'a trick.' The sentence is a comma splice; use a semicolon or separate sentences. Suggestion: match tense across clauses, use plural for countable noun, and avoid comma splices.

× Yes, I would say so. I think bikes are one of the most popular forms of transport in type 1, especially in the capital Taipei.

✓ Yes, I would say so. I think bikes are one of the most popular forms of transport in Taiwan, especially in the capital, Taipei.

The tense 'think' is fine, but 'in type 1' is incorrect word choice—likely intended 'Taiwan.' Also add commas around appositive 'Taipei.' Suggestion: use the correct country name and punctuate appositives with commas.

× Many people own their bike and the government also builds a lot of paths for bike and set up many public by share stations so people can travel.

✓ Many people own their bikes, and the government also builds many bike paths and has set up many public bike-sharing stations so people can travel.

Agreement: 'their bike' should be plural 'their bikes' to match plural possessive. Use plural 'paths' and 'bike paths' for clarity. 'Set up' should match tense with 'builds'—use 'has set up' or 'sets up'; here 'has set up' fits continuing result. 'public by share stations' is incorrect word order; correct is 'public bike-sharing stations.' Suggestion: ensure plural nouns match plural possessives, use consistent verb tenses, and use correct compound noun order.