自行车— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 用更自然的時態和更簡潔的句子來回答；注意主句與從句的時態一致並使用連接詞使語意連貫。可以把冗長或重複的信息刪減，並補充一兩個具體細節（如年齡或第一次學會騎車的情景）。此外，避免口頭語（uh）並控制句子數量不超過5句。

範例: Yes, I did. When I was about eight, my friends all had bicycles and spent every afternoon riding around the neighborhood, so I asked my parents to buy one for me. I remember learning to ride in a small park near my house, and after a few tries I could ride without help.

建議: 回答時要先給出直接立場句，然後用清晰的原因支持；避免重複與口頭語，使用連接詞（for example, because, however）使語意流暢。提供更具體的對比（例如城市與鄉村的使用情況、天氣或地形如何影響騎行）。控制句子數量與長度，保持自然表達。

範例: Yes, overall bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas and small towns where they are a cheap and convenient way to get around. However, in my city biking is less common because the terrain is hilly and the coastal roads are windy, which makes cycling difficult and less safe.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

原句考官問的是過去(“Did you have...when you were a child?”)，應使用過去時。將現在時 have 改為過去時 had。建議：回答關於過去的事時使用過去時態。

× When I was a child it was a summer and my friend and I play out outside and they all have their own bikes and they can already ride them very well.

✓ When I was a child it was summer and my friends and I played outside; they all had their own bikes and could already ride them very well.

句子涉及多處時態與數的錯誤：1) “it was a summer” 可簡化為 “it was summer”。2) 主語為複數 “my friends and I”，動詞應使用過去式 played（而非 play）。3) “they all have” 應為過去時 had。4) “they can already ride” 描述過去能力需用過去時態 could。建議：描述過去事件時整句保持過去時，並注意單複數一致。

× So I ask my parents to buy me one to play with them.

✓ So I asked my parents to buy me one to play with them.

原句使用現在時 ask，但描述的是過去發生的請求，應使用過去式 asked。建議：在敘述過去發生的動作時使用過去式。

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country, but uh, not in my city because in my city there are, uh, there, our city is beside the sea and it also, uh, there are lot out there also have mountains.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country, but not in my city because our city is beside the sea and also has mountains.

原句冗長且有多處語法問題：1) “in my city there are, uh, there,” 重複且影響語法清晰。2) “it also, uh, there are lot out there also have mountains” 結構混亂，主語與動詞不一致。更正句用簡潔的現在時描述一般事實：our city is beside the sea and also has mountains。建議：避免重複短語，保持主語與動詞一致，使用簡潔句子表達地理特徵。

× So it's not really, uh, good to ride bicycle.

✓ So it's not really good to ride a bicycle.

在英語中，單數可數名詞通常需要冠詞。原句缺少不定冠詞 a，應為 a bicycle；或改為複數形式 ride bicycles/ride a bike。建議：單數可數名詞前加 a/an，或使用複數形式。